LI:To edit our writing using DRAFT.
This week for writing LS2 has been focusing on Abstract Noun Poems. Our abstract noun is about culture. An Abstract noun is something that exists but you cannot touch, an abstract noun also comes with metaphors and 5 senses. The 5 senses we use to make our poem powerful is using smell,taste,hear,feeling and see. Something that helped us write our abstract nouns is using Metaphors , Simile , complex sentences , punctuation, complex sentences and word hippo.The poem starts with a definition of the abstract noun we've chosen and the next sentence starts with it is … using one of the senses.LS2 definition or using DRAFT is Delete,Rearrange,Fix,Talk.Something I found interesting is being able to work with my partener and learning from eachother.Something I learnt about abstract noun is being able to write a powerful poem that will create a painted picture of words in the readers mind.
Talofa lava Lily,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very powerful poem that you have written. I also like how you have written the structure of how to write an abtract noun. What was your favourite line in the poem? Why is that?
Great work!
Chisa
Konnichiwa Chisa thank you for taking the time to comment onto my blog post. My favourtie line I like is the part where it says it is the taonga of treasured people, who create their history written in the book of life. What did you learn from reading my poem?
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