LI: To write an explanation using TEEL paragraphs .
This week we have been revisiting explanation writing. Next week is our assessment week so we did this collaborative challenge to remind ourselves what is needed when we write explanations. I have been working with Hosea and Ellenora on our explanation about our PBS care values Confidence , Attitude , Respect and Excellence and Innovation we have witten 4 paragraphs of teel to every care value and teel stands for Topic sentence , Explain , Evidence and Link . Me , Hosea and Ellenora use all of our opinion to come up with 4 paragraphs for teel that represents each PBS care values and we have made an screencastify about our 16 paragraphs of our care values , something i found interesting about writing about an explanation is being able to understand how to write a TEEL paragraph and being able to share my ideas and communicate with others .
Hi Lily,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed that the acronym T.E.E.L help you with writing your explanation about the C.A.R.E values.I have also done something like yours the T.E.E.L. also help me with this task.
What was the most interesting part of the task for you ?
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Talofa Lava Lily
ReplyDeleteI have enjoed reading your work.I like how you told us the structure and language features in the blurb. I think you could work on explaining the differnet structures (TEEL). What does Teel mean?