Writing 5-7-10

LI: To use 5-7-10 to write creatively

Lightning never strikes twice, does it?

That was the question that occupied their frightened minds as they crouched, huddling together, next the pile of dusty sacks in the base of the windmill…  

While a little group of friends from a nearby village  huddling together in a cold abandoned windmill while there is a big storm happening outside.Many think that It was a good decision to stay in the windmill and hide under something while there is a storm happening and some think that the lightning might strike and leave a fire on the top.

  What might happen next ?  While the little group of friends still huddle In a group of frightened thoughts about if they can be back  at home with their loved ones and have dinner with their little group of family .

 Well I've seen a thunderstorm. It was not a good experience for me and my family. We were in our house while there was light striking from the clouds to the ground and seeing my family frightened from the noises and light had my heart beating real fast to the point I thought something bad was going to happen. The noises of the lighting were like a thunderclap or a peal of thunder.

 What causes a thunderstorm? A thunderstorm is caused by mixing warm air and cold air . What can lighting cause? Lighting can cause heavy rain , Strong wind , Hail and tornadoes .  Seeing people lose homes and their loved ones in a Thunderstorm , Tornadoes or tsunami makes me feel like never being in these situations again .

This week me and Sakshi worked together to do the the 5-7-10 writing challenge . Mrs Anderson gave us picture and a starter to finish our story by being creative and using Draft ( D- delete , R- rearrange, A- add, T- Talk) to make our story more creative and interesting. Me and Sakshi had to write a paragraph individually for five minutes and then talk for seven minutes and give feedback and tell each other what we need to change or what we need to add . Doing this task with Sakshi helped build sharing my ideas and making a creative story .